Discover Raw and Authentic Poems by John Tiong Chunghoo ✍️

if you wish to <br />have an afternoon <br />of fun, what about <br />reading throgh <br />the amateur poem <br />writing sites <br /> <br />the work here reeks <br />of things raw - <br />some even confessed <br />they wrote their work <br />while cutting their wrists <br /> <br />of things great - <br />some poets actually <br />are already carrying stars <br />- but think they need <br />to be on the ground <br />- stay in touch with <br />their best readers <br /> <br />of things romantic <br />- teenage lovers <br />who day in and day out <br />shower sweet love verses <br />like they would roses on <br />their new founded flame <br /> <br />of things sleazy - <br />some verses actually <br />came right off the hands <br />that had a minute ago <br />been exploring the powerkeg <br />of the sensous world <br /> <br />they should be censored <br />but then these considerate perverts <br />even took the trouble to write the <br />'bewarned' line <br /> <br />and of course <br />the greatest fun <br />are the young poets <br />who afford a glimpse <br />of their little world <br />the folksy rhythm <br />and heavenly rhyme <br /> <br />the greatest laugh <br />would be when <br />we stumble upon <br />the inexperienced <br />ones who think poetry <br />is throwing words at you, <br />all the words that not many <br />of us could actually pronounce <br />so that the whole piece would <br />sound erudite... only if you <br />could go beyond those words <br /> <br />the whole poem makes you feel <br />like you walk into a house <br />to see the bed upside down <br />in the kitchen, the cooking pot <br />on the edge of the bedroom table <br />the fridge at the attic <br />the washing machine on a flower bed <br />and the toilet right in the middle <br />of the living room <br /> <br />then there are those <br />who are queens of words <br />their verses run like pistils, <br />filamens, petals, colours <br />of orchids..classic, regal, <br />exquisitei<br /><br />john tiong chunghoo<br /><br />http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/poem-about-poetry-poetry-sites/